Second boarding assignment for Story Art Development. Got some good feedback about staging and some class mates suggested that I add or change a shot to allow for an establishing shot of the interior of the apartment. Someone also suggested to make it a joke at the end, in which they actually went to a costume party and hear about the crime.
This is really nice, Ash! I was able to follow the story really well, and it made me want to see more :) Nice drawing too! :D
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